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Melvin looked up towards the angry genie girl with teary eyes. “Can’t we talk about this?”


She sent a ball of magical energy flying towards him but Melvin just barely managed to hop out of the way. Melvin hopped quickly away from the enraged genie barely avoiding magical blasts.             


“You’re alien girlfriend won’t help you here!!” She summone a giant magic sphere over her head. “Hey batter, batter, batter SA-WING!!!”

Melvin started to hop faster now that he had a giant ball of magical energy and when it hit the ground Melvin went flying through the air from the force of the blast, all the while shouting “SOMEBODY GET THIS KA-RAZY GENIE GIRL AWAY FROM ME!!!”

When the blast subsided Gene couldn’t seem to find Melvin anywhere.

“Now where did you…”


The very mirror she had been looking for had fallen out of the sky and onto her head.

“Phew, I really thought I was a goner there for a moment. Lucky thing I landed on something soft.”

She took the mirror off of her head and gave it a death glare.

“Oh uh hello there.”

Gene threw Melvin towards the ground intent on shattering him. Instead the end of his frame became seeded in the ground.

“BWAHA!! I live!!!”

Gene pointed her finger at him and fired a stream of magical energy. Melvin winced clutching his eyes shut, waiting for the pain…which surprisingly enough never came. He opened his eyes to see that the magic had bounced off of his reflective surface.


“Oh yeah?” Gene changed her arm into a musket gun “Let’s see how you’re reflective surface stands up to GRADE A LEAD!!!”

Melvin screamed wildly as he ran (hopped) away.

An Elmer Fudd’s hat “Be vewy vewy quiet, I’m hunting miwwows! Hehheheheheheheeheeh!”

She fired a musket ball which just barely missed the hopping mirror.

“I’ll get you, you wascley miwwow!”


Melvin saw a crevasse on the bottom of the stone wall up ahead. He built up some more momentum and threw himself forward making sure to land on his back leading him to slide straight under.

“Drat I can’t shoot him now.” cursed Gene.

Melvin breathed a sigh of relief. “Safe…finally safe.”

Yes Melvin felt like he had finally found a safe haven, too bad it all crumbled down around him.

“Now that’s just not fair!” said Melvin.

A giant golf tee sprouted out from underneath him lifting him high into the air. Looking up he saw a giant Gene dressed as a golfer.

“Nothing relaxes me like golf.”

Gene magically made a giant golf club appeared in her hands and started to take aim.

“Now hang on there Tiger…”


With a mighty swing she sent Melvin hurdling through the skies.
My Good friend *Dragon-Wing-Z is helding an OC vs. OC fight contest.

So it's my Gene the Genie from my story at fanfiction: [link]


His Melvin the mirror from his story [link]

I know the idea of me actually posting something is pretty out there but somehow I don't think this thing would have been welcome at fanfiction . net

Sorry about the last dev, I'm still trying to figure this site out, the more I learn the more I think I should stick to good ol fanfiction.

But here's the real fight, guaranteed to be random, I hope you enjoy
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nesilverwing Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
Most amusing. ^_^
all of Melvin's runnings and screamings made me giggle.
mdizzle999872 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, glad to hear it. Don't forget to got to *Dragon-Wing-Z to vote.
nesilverwing Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
I won't, thank you. ^_^
mdizzle999872 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Dragon-Wing-Z Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
Again, this is an awesome story and fight. :D
mdizzle999872 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, it was fun to write. XD
Dragon-Wing-Z Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008
I'm about halfway through my story, by the way. I should have it finished soon. :)
mdizzle999872 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2008  Hobbyist Writer
Excellent, I hope to read it soon
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